this is such a lovely game! the small details really made it a better experience and the characterization was great! i only wish there was more of it, or we get to see what happens next, but thank you for a wonderful little game, hard work clearly pays off :D
This was one of the cutest games i've played so far awe- though, not gonna' lie, I thought this was gonna be horror or something for a second the moment Benjamin mentioned the "thing" in the forest looking like his wife- I was confused since it wasn't tagged as it so I wondered if it was meant as a plot-twist lol (I even got kinda cautious when Melody gave me the boat task bc of what would happen if I messed up - which I did but I got a pretty damn good message instead)
Holy cow this is amazing! It's so cute and has such a wonderful aesthetic to it! The ending was absolutely adorable and my heart melted. This portrayed some really good messages! *SPOILERS* Especially if you mess up with Melony and she teaches you about learning to move on and forgive. I loved it!
I love the aesthetic of the game. The artwork was pretty and it was clear what things were supposed to be. The ending was very cute and heartwarming, too, though I could definitely see something like that not being as seamless and easy as the main character wants. Could make for an interesting expansion or sequel.
For the future, I would recommend having varied gameplay. Having so many fetch quests in a row kind of made the story drag on. Some things you could do is vary it with puzzles, battles, friendship moments/story beats, etc. You had some story beats related to fetch quests, but it wouldn't hurt to have some unrelated and reward the player with what to do next with story beats, too. For example instead of having the player deliver an item to a citizen she says no one likes, show that. Have people complaining them. Use conversation to warm up to the quest giver to avoid having to interact with him. There's more that could be done. Instead of 'go find my cat' maybe have it 'help me find my cat' and they could have interactions as they explore together.
Otherwise your story's very wholesome and sweet, your artwork is adorable and I look forward to your future work.
If you set aside aesthetics (which is cute) and plot of the game (which is sentimental nonsense, at the least I was unable to interpret it in such way that it would make sense), leaving only its mechanics, almost the whole game is one long series of barters (i.e. exchange A for B, then exchange B for C, and so on). I said almost because at the end there is a puzzle.
This game is so nice, I've played it at least six times already. The characters are so fun and the art style is lovely, and overall the story was super cute! 10/10, I'm going to recommend this to a friend who's just getting into gaming. (:
Beautiful Game! I somehow messed up the boat puzzle and I didn't save before it. I really wanna know what happens if you beat it but at the same time I don't really wanna go through half the game for what's probably not much. Could anyone tell me what happens if you beat it?
If you don't beat it you can still go see Teeth (for me I couldn't find out how to get back to the other side so I just went up) and Artemis befriends her. I'm guessing you get the same dialogue except you miss that interaction where she gets happy
this is just a really cute, fun game. kind of a classic rpg trading quest style, but very well done. i would definitely recommend this game if you like super story based games. it gets a 10/10 from me.
The story in the game was great and so is the art style and many thinking puzzles(I cheated on the boat one). Were you inspired by Undertale/Deltarune cuz it feels like that. There are not many games like this so keep it up.
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i wanna be friends with teeth
thank you for this beautifull storry. i thing. the storry hide somthing.
... somthing special.
This is beautifull and I love it
-Made A Video.
"they got us in the first half, not gonna lie. i thought this is gonna be a horror game but nope it's not."
this is such a lovely game! the small details really made it a better experience and the characterization was great! i only wish there was more of it, or we get to see what happens next, but thank you for a wonderful little game, hard work clearly pays off :D
**SPOILERS**
This was one of the cutest games i've played so far awe- though, not gonna' lie, I thought this was gonna be horror or something for a second the moment Benjamin mentioned the "thing" in the forest looking like his wife- I was confused since it wasn't tagged as it so I wondered if it was meant as a plot-twist lol (I even got kinda cautious when Melody gave me the boat task bc of what would happen if I messed up - which I did but I got a pretty damn good message instead)
PS. No I did not miss dem handcuffs in the box-
✨✨Empecé a jugar este juego hace poco, animate a
pasar por mi canal ☆ ～('▽^人)✨✨
aea xd , lo vere
Incredibly charming atmosphere and characters! I adore the messages this game portrayed and I'd love to see more of your work! :)
this is soo cute. the art style is aesthetic, the ending was amazing too. i love ittttt
Adorable!! I was scared that it's a creepy game, but it's not! How old is Artemis? I wanna be like her!
Holy cow this is amazing! It's so cute and has such a wonderful aesthetic to it! The ending was absolutely adorable and my heart melted. This portrayed some really good messages! *SPOILERS* Especially if you mess up with Melony and she teaches you about learning to move on and forgive. I loved it!
**THIS REVIEW CONTAINS SPOILERS
I love the aesthetic of the game. The artwork was pretty and it was clear what things were supposed to be. The ending was very cute and heartwarming, too, though I could definitely see something like that not being as seamless and easy as the main character wants. Could make for an interesting expansion or sequel.
For the future, I would recommend having varied gameplay. Having so many fetch quests in a row kind of made the story drag on. Some things you could do is vary it with puzzles, battles, friendship moments/story beats, etc. You had some story beats related to fetch quests, but it wouldn't hurt to have some unrelated and reward the player with what to do next with story beats, too. For example instead of having the player deliver an item to a citizen she says no one likes, show that. Have people complaining them. Use conversation to warm up to the quest giver to avoid having to interact with him. There's more that could be done. Instead of 'go find my cat' maybe have it 'help me find my cat' and they could have interactions as they explore together.
Otherwise your story's very wholesome and sweet, your artwork is adorable and I look forward to your future work.
Such a cute, short and sweet game! I absolutely loved the ending!💞
why is someone downvoting every comment?
i don't really know
very cute :)
I really love the game, it was also funny a little short but very good.
I loved the game, a litle bit short but very nice
Great game loved the characters!
A beautiful little game with a beautiful ending.
I love it and the ending is so cute! It was short but really enjoyable thank you for this
The ending was really sweet :D lovely game!
If you set aside aesthetics (which is cute) and plot of the game (which is sentimental nonsense, at the least I was unable to interpret it in such way that it would make sense), leaving only its mechanics, almost the whole game is one long series of barters (i.e. exchange A for B, then exchange B for C, and so on). I said almost because at the end there is a puzzle.
i rlly loved it. it was one of the best games for me owo
This game is so nice, I've played it at least six times already. The characters are so fun and the art style is lovely, and overall the story was super cute! 10/10, I'm going to recommend this to a friend who's just getting into gaming. (:
Beautiful Game! I somehow messed up the boat puzzle and I didn't save before it. I really wanna know what happens if you beat it but at the same time I don't really wanna go through half the game for what's probably not much. Could anyone tell me what happens if you beat it?
// SPOILER //
The witch gives you a bag of meat as a a gift. You later give the bag to Teeth and she will be very happy with it :)
What happens if you don't beat it?
If you don't beat it you can still go see Teeth (for me I couldn't find out how to get back to the other side so I just went up) and Artemis befriends her. I'm guessing you get the same dialogue except you miss that interaction where she gets happy
Lovely Game! I loved playing it to kill some time. You almost tricked me into failing the boat puzzle tho!! ;)
Ah man, so homey. I love the warm colours and all of the music / sounds here. The story was fun, and it's nice how it slowly unwinds.
this is just a really cute, fun game. kind of a classic rpg trading quest style, but very well done. i would definitely recommend this game if you like super story based games. it gets a 10/10 from me.
small but a warm story.
This was a great game! it was so cute, I loved the ending too. Great job!
Hi friend, I have a question. How did you make the windows menu without transpharency ?
That was so cuteee. Definitely recommend it.
This game is perfect to relax at the end of the day. Relly cute story.
i just came to finish the game, it was so cool and so cute! i know i'm too sensitive but i even cried a little at the end ! good job :)
The graphics looks so clean and cute. I will definitely try the game.
The story in the game was great and so is the art style and many thinking puzzles(I cheated on the boat one). Were you inspired by Undertale/Deltarune cuz it feels like that. There are not many games like this so keep it up.
There more games like this type , even before undertale, but you gotta search for them
This game was such a delight to play <3
My thoughts are kinda scramble but here they are:
Your use of minimal colors was done really well. I loved the scenes you were able to create with them.
The characters were really cool too! Even though it's a short game, they felt very distinct to me.
My faaavorite part was the casual spooky vibes throughout the game and lead up to the ending. You did such a good job! Thank you for making this <3
this is such a lovely game! i love the art & the ending is very very good too.